求助：帮朋友翻的简历，需要高手帮我改一下：）

向阳

朋友要去新加坡找工作，托我翻译一下简历跟自我介绍。可惜水平有限，老师又出门旅游去了都，有高手指点我一下么？让她出丑她等下要从新加坡回来拿刀砍死我。好恐怖~~~~`


个人简历
姓名：***
性别：女
出生年月：1984年4月3日
身份证号：************
国籍：中华人民共和国
民族：汉
体重：50kg
身高：165cm
文化程度：大专
毕业院校：中国浙江台州职业技术学院九峰分院
专业：英语
爱好：音乐
特长：交际
性格：外向
身体状况：良好
家庭地址：中国浙江省三门县泗淋乡下道头村
邮编：
联系方式：
受教育情况：1990年9月~1996年7月 中国浙江省三门县泗淋小学
           1996年9月~1999年7月 中国浙江省三门县泗淋中学
           1999年9月~2002年7月 中国浙江省台州职业技术学院九峰分院 文秘专业
           2002年9月~2004年7月 中国浙江省台州职业技术学院九峰分院英语专业
工作简历：1999年9月~2002年1月 期间的寒暑假就职于中国武汉丝宝集团公司任商务代表
         2002年1月~2002年9月 就职于中国浙江省台州路桥四星级鑫都国际大酒店， 任餐厅领班助理
         2002年9月~2003年10月 中国浙江省温州科建企业管理咨询有限公司台州办事处。任市场部副主任。
         2003年10月~2004年9月 中国浙江省台州精英机电工贸有限公司。任市场部经理。
工作业绩：
本人工作期间认真负责，相信付出就有回报，每一份工作都得到领导和同事的好评。特别是在温州科建企业管理咨询有限公司和台州精英机电工贸有限公司负责市 场营销工作时，本人分别被评为企业的年度金牌业务能手。
工作心得：
服务好才会赢得上帝，客户是上帝。必须有良好的个人修养及文化素质功底才会服务好客户，有效的共同会带来客户。


                                C V
Name**
Gender:Female
Date of birth:April 3rd,1984
ID No.***********
Nationality:China
Nationan
Weight:50kg
Height:165cm
Education level:Junior College
Graduated school:Taizhou technological institute nine peak branch ,Zhejiang Province,China
Major:English
Hobby:Music
Special skill:Communication
Character:Extroversion
Health:Excellent
Adress:Xia Daotou rural area(?),Silin village, Sanmen County, Zhejiang Province, China
Post Code:
Tel:
Mobile:
Education background:
Sep.1990~Jul.1996 Silin primary school, Sanmen County , Zhejiang Province, China
Sep,1996~Jul.1999 Silin middle school, Sanmen County , Zhejiang Province, China
Sep,1999~Jul.2002 Taizhou technological institute nine peak branch ,Zhejiang Province,China  Major in Secretarial Science
Sep,1999~Jul.2002 Taizhou technological institute nine peak branch ,Zhejiang Province,China Major in English
Working resume:
Sep.1999~Jan,2001 During the vocation, worked for Wuhan Sibao Group Company
                 Assume the office of commercial agent
Jan,2002~Sep.2002 Worked for Xindu International Hotel, a four-star hotel located in Luqiao,Taizhou,Zhejiang Province, China
                 Assume the office of Headwaiter's Assistant
Sep,2002~Oct,2003 Worked for Wenzhou Kejian Business Management Consultation Ltd, Taizhou office
                 Assume the office of Deputy director of Marketing Department
Oct,2003~Sep,2004 Worked for TaizhouTaizhou Jingying electromechanical industry and trade Co., Ltd.,Zhejiang Province,China
                Assume the office of Marketing Department Director
Working outstanding achievement:
I am earnestly and responsibly during work time. I always believe that my effort will pay off.I gained leaders' and colleagues' praises at every job, especially when I took charge in marketing in Wenzhou Kejian Business Management Consultation Ltd, Taizhou office and Taizhou Jingying electromechanical industry and trade Co., Ltd.,Zhejiang Province,China . I was selected as gold medal business experts.
Work gains:
Good service will win the God, clients are the God.(?) If only you have good mannners and refinement that can give the clients good service. Effective communication will bring cilents.



自我介绍
Self-introduction

我的名字叫***，一个快乐而自信的女孩，今年21岁。我来自古老而美丽的国度—— 中国，我热爱英语。所以当我读完文秘专业的中专后，我又继续在台州职业技术学院九 峰分院学完英语函授专业，并顺利获得了英语专科文凭。
My name is LuoAijuan, a happy and confident girl.I'm 21 years old.I come from an old and beautiful country----China.I have deep love for English. So after I finish reading secretarial's specialized special secondary school , I continue in job technological institute nine peak branch finish English teach by correspondence the speciality Taizhou, and has obtained English training diploma smoothly.
踏入社会，开始我第一份工作是在我读中专第二年暑假，在一家武汉丝宝集团公司任产品商务代表。虽然辛苦，但我 干得很卖力，深受领导和同事好评。
Getting into the society, it is to study in me on the summer vacation of second year of special secondary school to begin my first job, take the post as the commercial representative of the products in a silk treasure group company of Wuhan. Though work hard, I do very hard, well received by leader and colleague. 中专毕业前夕，我来到了台州路桥四星级酒店鑫都 国际大酒店实习，任餐厅领班助理，学会了基本的服务礼仪，也为我真正走上工作岗位打下良好基础。温州科建企业管理咨询有限公司给了我锻炼的机会，我认识了台州大部分企业，初步了解了企业管理的科学化，规范化和系统化。深度地理解服务于客户的十二大要素。
Shortly before the special secondary school graduates, I have come to the road bridge high comfort hotel of Taizhou prosperously the international hotel is practised, take the post as headwaiter and assistant, learn the basic service etiquette , really go on the work position and lay the good foundation for me too. The department of Wenzhou has built Consulting Co., Ltd. of business administration and given me a chance to temper, I have known most enterprises of Taizhou, have found out about the scientific process of business administration tentatively, standardization and systematized. The depth is understood to serve the customer's 12th National Congress key element.
因为各方面原因，我在科建工作一年多后离开了，加盟现在就职的台州精英机电工贸有限公司，任市场部经理一职，广泛接触各企业厂家，而我很快成为公司的金牌业务能手，快乐并认真地工作着，所以我热爱每一份我工作过的工作，也认真做着领导分配的工作。为公司和企业创造效益，服务于客户，带来客户。我会珍惜每一次机会，愿我们能有愉快的合作。
Because of the reasons of various fields, I have left after the department built for more than one year, join electromechanical industry and trade Co., Ltd. of elite in Taizhou taking office now, taking the post as a duty of manager of market department, contact the producer of every enterprise extensively, and I become gold medal business experts of the company quickly, working happily and conscientiously , so I have deep love for every job that I have worked, doing the work that the leader assigns conscientiously too. Create benefit for company and enterprise, serve the customer , bring the customer. I will treasure the chance each time , wish us to have happy cooperation.




! ! 你们尽量的批评吧！！！！！！！！

Qantas

Just be honest, it is tons of crap. Maybe it is good enough for Singaporean. We will see ...

ouu

Just search one from google.com. Using keyword: marketing, for example.

James Yu

不过这回我是面试官

James Yu

可以了，其实主要在面试，我今天就有面试

小小学生

英文简历错误太多
深造两年再出去吧

向阳

真诚感谢大头的拔刀相助！！！！！

向阳

最初由 大头 发布
[B]WORK心得？

哈哈 [/B]

;( ;( ;(

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最初由 素白的月 发布
[B]最好写一封求职信，专门针对不同公司而写的。另外简历要做的美观大方，最好有点特色！不要用传统的表格式。 [/B]

：）

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最初由 Amu 发布
[B]自我介绍也分个段撒，看的我眼都花了，不知道看哪行了 [/B]

昨天急着出去，对关心帖子的各位表示深沉的歉意！！！！！ ;(

Error

最初由 Amu 发布
[B]晕，俺只认识上面的阿拉伯数字~~~ [/B]

又捣乱回家做饭去。。。。。

mzbaby

最初由 yuechu 发布
[B]俺这类简历通常情况下是没等看完就直接进垃圾筒了.俺始终认为.简历都不能做好不能做的有个性.这个人肯定啥也不是.当初夏夜因为简历也被俺骂哭了 [/B]

好象没这么夸张吧？？？

eggborn

最初由 gentman 发布
[B]datou is a qinkuairen. [/B]

没错！雇菲佣都至少得符合这个标准。

gentman

datou is a qinkuairen.

大头

The service is in order to gain God, the customer is God. Will not serve the good customer unless there are good personal training and grounding in basic skills of cutural dynamics, effective cooperation will bring the customer .

eggborn

最初由 yuechu 发布
[B]俺这类简历通常情况下是没等看完就直接进垃圾筒了.俺始终认为.简历都不能做好不能做的有个性.这个人肯定啥也不是.当初夏夜因为简历也被俺骂哭了 [/B]

不能招什么人都你这样审。有些角色就需要老老实实的，有些当然要有点思想和创意。

大头

我来自古老而美丽的国度—— 中国，我热爱英语。所以当我读完文秘专业的中专后，我又继续在台州职业技术学院九 峰分院学完英语函授专业，并顺利获得了英语专科文凭。
I have deep love for English. So after I finish reading secretarial's specialized special secondary school , I continue in job technological institute nine peak branch finish English teach by correspondence the speciality Taizhou, and has obtained English training diploma smoothly.

踏入社会，开始我第一份工作是在我读中专第二年暑假，在一家武汉丝宝集团公司任产品商务代表。虽然辛苦，但我 干得很卖力，深受领导和同事好评。
Getting into the society, it is to study in me on the summer vacation of second year of special secondary school to begin my first job, take the post as the commercial representative of the products in a silk treasure group company of Wuhan. Though work hard, I do very hard, well received by leader and colleague.

中专毕业前夕，我来到了台州路桥四星级酒店鑫都 国际大酒店实习，任餐厅领班助理，学会了基本的服务礼仪，也为我真正走上工作岗位打下良好基础。温州科建企业管理咨询有限公司给了我锻炼的机会，我认识了台州大部分企业，初步了解了企业管理的科学化，规范化和系统化。深度地理解服务于客户的十二大要素。
Shortly before the special secondary school graduates, I have come to the road bridge high comfort hotel of Taizhou prosperously the international hotel is practised, take the post as headwaiter and assistant, learn the basic service etiquette , really go on the work position and lay the good foundation for me too. The department of Wenzhou has built Consulting Co., Ltd. of business administration and given me a chance to temper, I have known most enterprises of Taizhou, have found out about the scientific process of business administration tentatively, standardization and systematized. The depth is understood to serve the customer's 12th National Congress key element.

因为各方面原因，我在科建工作一年多后离开了，加盟现在就职的台州精英机电工贸有限公司，任市场部经理一职，广泛接触各企业厂家，而我很快成为公司的金牌业务能手，快乐并认真地工作着，所以我热爱每一份我工作过的工作，也认真做着领导分配的工作。为公司和企业创造效益，服务于客户，带来客户。我会珍惜每一次机会，愿我们能有愉快的合作。

Because of the reasons of various fields, I have left after the department built for more than one year, join electromechanical industry and trade Co., Ltd. of elite in Taizhou taking office now, taking the post as a duty of manager of market department, contact the producer of every enterprise extensively, and I become gold medal business experts of the company quickly, working happily and conscientiously , so I have deep love for every job that I have worked, doing the work that the leader assigns conscientiously too. Create benefit for company and enterprise, serve the customer , bring the customer. I will treasure the chance each time , wish us to have happy cooperation.

小老太

中学 小学  高中啥的就别写了吧

大头

Working gains

大头

WORK心得？

哈哈